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The Spring Cleaning Tag – For Writing

A highly useful tag on writing goals.

spring cleaning tag graphic


  • Link back to the blogger who tagged you! . . . That would be Kenzie. Thanks, Kenzie!
  • Include the graphic in your post . . . That’s done.
  • Answer the questions . . . It is complete.
  • Tag three other people . . . Maybe I will indeed…


Dust Bunnies and Plot Bunnies: Reorganize Your Writing Goals (or make new ones)


Revising Spectra 1 (The Desolation of Kaldoa) is my main goal, and the only one I can really guarantee working on consistently.  I have a pile of others stories I can work on too, comics that need to be drawn, but I know it never works to give them deadlines.

Write a novella of some kind to test self-publishing systems, since I’m optimistic about completing a Spectra book.  I have no idea what I would write though.  Probably something incredibly silly and crazy that only makes sense to me, since I just want to do it test the mechanics of publishing and accustom myself to legal matters and all that.  Sort of a throwaway test book before I put my precious Spectra out into the world.

I divided Spectra 1 into three parts, one each for Sheyla, Des, and other characters.  I’ve been unsure of how many POV’s to have in the first novelization, but everyone’s part is so small they will have to be combined to make a complete novel.  It’s nice to have each major arc in its own document right now so I can work on one story at a time and then combine them into chronological order later.

Annnnnnnd…I just entered the 100-for-100 writing contest/event thingie.  Right at the last minute (okay, I technically had about 24 hours to sign up for it still).  Since I want to get Spectra 1 publishable, getting myself to write 100 words everyday is a very good idea.  I’m pretty nervous that it goes on for one hundred days (ends in late August), but I really gotta make progress on Spectra, so there we go…

Which Stage Are You At? Expound!

Square zero for the novella!  I may use a story idea I have, or I might go for something crazy that breaks the fourth wall, who knows.

For Spectra…I’ve got Sheyla’s side and Desmond’s side neatly divided, and I’m focusing on Sheyla first.  I have a lot of beginning scenes to write and flesh out, and I hate beginnings so much.  Man, I hate beginnings.  I just want to get into the action already, but there has to be build up, people need to know certain fundamentals of the characters and the world, and I never know if I’m really doing it right, and I really don’t like it.

Part of the problem is attempting to freewrite scenes within an existing manuscript is very messy and things never mesh well.  The second half is much better than the beginning.  Not too surprising since the second half is where Sheyla “adventures” and directly faces the larger plot of Spectra.  It’s a little funny though, because Desmond’s beginning is much more solid than his ending for this book.  Though he still needs scenes in the prologue or chapter 1.  But overall his arc doesn’t have nearly as many choppy scenes and non-existent transitions that Sheyla has.

Oh, yes, and I finally managed to get the overall Spectra 1 draft to 40,000 words!  It’s still tiny!  Especially because there are still some author notes and at least two redundant scenes in there.

But probably the real reason I hate the beginning so much, is because I hate Sheyla’s parents and the pieces of cardboard they are.  Oh, and there’s not really any fighting, so that’s boring too.  Sheyla’s parents don’t even have names yet.  That’s probably holding them back a ton.  At least her dad managed to get some semblance of a personality by becoming a shuttle mechanic, and thus helping the plot by giving Sheyla useful skills.  But Sheyla’s mother is the most boring piece of cardboard.

Sheyla’s family is supposed to be a very nice family, a great family (in contrast to Desmond’s), but you know what, maybe I just don’t buy that.  Maybe a “perfect family” sounds like a lie and it’s super boring and I don’t want to pretend to know what a really good family is like.

So maybe Sheyla’s mother is actually going to have some problems.  Maybe she’s not that great a mother.  Maybe she’s actually distant, which makes a good deal of sense since Sheyla bonded with her dad over learning electronics and robotics and all the stuff related to shuttles and hovercraft that her magic is all about.  But her mother doesn’t have any kind of connection like that to her.  So maybe that causes problems.  Maybe she inadvertently treats Sheyla more like a status symbol, because she is a mage, rather than as a kid.  She won’t be an all out narcissist or anything, but she won’t be a tropey Perfect Mother(TM) or whatever it is I feared would haunt my story.

Maybe I won’t have to gag on nice family closeness because they won’t be that close and we can just get to the cool explosion and psychological horror and all the drama and doom awaiting the main characters.  Yes, that sounds better.

Bring on the aliens so everyone can join the dark side…

So there we go, I’m at the middle stage where some chunks are still pretty messy, but at least I have a number of decently written scenes keeping me anchored and aware that It Can Get Better.

Especially since Sheyla’s classmates exist…


Treasure From The Back of The Closet (share one to three snippets you love)


Oh no, what do I put here?  I want to put funny things in here, but Spectra 1 really doesn’t have much humor (there is humor in the later books, thankfully).  Which ones do I love that aren’t spoilery?

“But why are we leaving?” Sheyla asked.

“You’ll understand when you’re older,” her dad said, putting his arm around her.

Allow me to introduce you to Sheyla’s classmates as they are written now!

“Hi, let’s hangout guys!” Sheyla said.

“I agree!” Ryan said.

“Robot party!” bubbly girl said.

“I only want to play BOARD GAMES!  So no one can be accused of cheating,” grump girl said.


And it is brought up:

“But what if xytari find us?  We’d get eaten!”

“I’d blast ‘em!” orange dude said.

“That’s why people move to the Union’s Capitol.”

“But that’s totally impossible!” Bubbly said.

“Nuh-uh!  I heard the confederacy is gonna try joining!” a guy said.


“Then we can ALL move there.”

“Since we’re all mages, but otherwise you’d have to be RICH.”

They go off to someone’s house to play go fish.


“But what’s up with the Union?” Sheyla asked.

“It’s a thing.”

“I dunno.”



“Guys, I heard that the Union experiments on mages, trying to make more!  Have all these rumors and stuff!” a guy said breathlessly.

“Eek! That sounds scary and spooky!” Bubbly said.


This is basically all the major plot points Sheyla has with her friends.  Except for the finally goodbye later.  It’s such a skeleton, but I prefer these kids over her parents any day (I mean, it helps they have names or nicknames, and I’ve written more notes about them, and also some of them show up again…).


Bonus:  Do Some Actual Spring Cleaning of Your Writer Self! (and share a picture!)

I washed some dishes that were cluttering up my desk, so that’s good enough for now.


Edit: Oops, I didn’t tag anyone…Now I have to think about that.  Or ignore it…Let’s just ignore it, it’s nearly summer anyway…


Life · Uncategorized

The Liebster Award Tag

Time for a tag, Kenzie has given me a pile of questions to answer.  At last I have completed it.

The Rules

Thank the blogger that nominated you – Thank you, Kenzie!

Answer the 11 questions they gave you

Name 11 facts about yourself – WHY IS THIS SO HARD?!

Nominate 11 bloggers to do the tag and make sure they know – We all know how this goes, everyone else has already been tagged.

Give them 11 questions to answer – I’m still gonna do it anyway.


The Answers

1.  What is the most hilarious pun you can think of? (go crazy with it, folks. I need a good laugh right now.)



2. Are you obsessed with any TV shows/movies/book series’? If so, what is it, and what sparked your obsession? (if you’re not obsessed with any of the above, feel free to just give your favorite flavor of cake for this question)

I’ve been watching most of the Marvel movies since last Fall, and I am finally caught up, awaiting Endgame.

(And avoiding spoilers now.)

3. If you could shapeshift into any mythical creature, which creature would you pick and why?

My initial thought is a dragon, but I’ve said that before, and I realized it might be more fun to be a fairy, cuz I could still look like myself but I’d have magic and be able to fly.  I would be a human sized fairy, not a tiny one, though.


4. What is one classic book you want to read before you die?

The Iliad, because that seems like the most pretentious answer possible, for I feel that if the only Classic one read was The Illiad, everyone would consider you an intellectual know-it-all braggart.  Cuz it’s not just a Classic, it’s an ancient Classic!

Also I once attempted to read it when I was younger and I got over 20 pages into it and that was further than my siblings ever got with it.

I’m so special, aren’t I? 😛

(I originally wrote Lord of the Rings in here, but then I went and read it last month.)


5. What is your favorite book of all time?

I’m not sure I have a favorite for all time, but my favorite book I read recently is the Lord of the Rings.  It was the right book at the right time for me.


6. If your answer for question 5 was being turned into a movie, which character would you want to play in the film and why?

I’d be an elf in the background.  Probably.


7. Oh no! Your purse just got stolen by a creepy old man in a ski mask! Thankfully, you managed to hold onto that seriously thick book you’ve been reading, though! Which book do you hurl at the old man’s head to knock him out cold and retrieve your precious satchel?

The DnD Player’s Handbook.  Look’s like I just gained some XP!  Or else, whatever library books I’m borrowing or returning.


8. IT’S A ZOMBIE APOCALYPSE!!! AAAAAH! What weapon do you arm yourself with in the old abandoned shed out back: A) a rusty pitchfork, B) a quiver of arrows (uncle Ben accidentally broke the bow while playing croquet three months ago), or C) a cheese grater, which you’re not really sure how it got out there in the first place, but you’re not willing to go down without a gouda fight?

Gotta say the rusty pitchfork is the best idea, the arrows are useless without a bow.  And the pitchfork is a versatile weapon you could stab or hit them with, at a bit of distance, so that’s good.

But it would also be good to take the quiver if I can make or repair a bow later.


9. Why did you decide to start a blog in the first place, and what are three things you wish you’d known before you started blogging?

Originally I wanted a place I could post about my stories and build up a webcomic space, and then I started using WordPress because my friends use it too.

I don’t know about three things, but I will say this: I wish I had really thought about what CATEGORIES to use for my blogs to organize things well.  As it is, there’s kind of a random assortment of Story and Comics, and why did I mix this up?  Basically, I wish I had thought through it a ton better early on, because now I feel like it’s a mess and it seems too annoying to fix if I even had an idea for what I wanted.  So.  Define your categories well before starting.

Also, I think I wish I had known my blog was going to be more of a casual behind-the-scenes showing of my writer/artist process rather than my original intent of posting the actual stories and art.  Because I derailed so far from that.


10. If you were a Neverland local, who would you be and why: A) one of the lost boys, B) a mermaid in mermaid lagoon, C) a pixie, or d) Captain Hook himself?

A mermaid.  I love the idea of swimming in a fantasy realm.


11. If you could have one wish granted, what would it be?

I would like my own home that I could decorate any way I want!


The Facts

11 facts about myself…

  1. Let me just draw a blank mind for this.  When my mind turns blank I tend to envision a mass of fog utterly engulfing the landscape around it.  Except maybe the mountaintops manage to show through if they’re backlit.
  2. I once saved a caterpillar from a spider web.
  3. I’m bad at strategy games so I don’t bother taking them seriously, but sometimes I still win.
  4. I despise Demise with all of my being.
  5. I like meteorology.
  6. I would go dungeon delving for secrets and treasure if I was teleported to a fantasy realm.
  7. I am dissatisfied with Desmond’s last name.  I have too many Kal- sounds everywhere.
  8. I like learning about interior decorating.
  9. Pinterest is my bingeing activity.  It goes with the above fact.
  10. I am not ready for warm weather to come.  Noooo!
  11. This was an excruciating list to put together.  I shall reward myself with hazelnut chocolate for it is tasty.



Sorry, but everyone has been tagged by others already.  But I’ll make up random questions anyway if someone wants to answer them on their blog or in the comments.


My Questions

1: What’s your favorite insect?

2: What’s a field of science you’re interested in? (Meteorology, electronics, biology…etc.)

3: Which of the four basic elements do you relate to most?

4: What’s a common theme or event in your dreams?

5: What’s a way of traveling you would like to try? (Roadtrip, cruiseship, train,  etc.)

6: If you could only have one dessert base for the rest of your life, would you prefer whipped cream or ice cream? (Or non-dairy equivalents)

7: What’s your favorite number?

8: If you entered a magical world, would you rather go delving in dungeons for treasure and secrets, get swept away into courtly intrigues and glamor, or immediately settle in a friendly forest and have tea with talking animals each day?

9: Or would you prefer to visit a futuristic sci-fi world and get yourself  a hoverbike?

10: What’s your favorite flower?

11: Would you rather have a talking cat, a gryphon, or a fireplace dragon (that steals all your jewelry) as a pet?

Art · sci-fi · Stories · Uncategorized

Celebrating 50 Followers!

Yay!  Thanks for following me, everybody!  At last count I had 53 followers, so that’s pretty cool for my little blog.

To further celebrate this, here is a sneak peak of something I’m working on:


Because flaming spaceships are just like fireworks, right?

A comic called The Last Ones.

It is a short story, or perhaps a cinematic-style short, that I’ve had in mind for a few months.  Since I’m struggling with Spectra and want to get some art practice in, I figure I should try to make this comic.  There’s only a few substantial scenes to it, so I hope it will actually be short.

I delayed starting it for so long because I don’t know any of the characters names.  Or the places.  But then I thought, “Maybe it’s not about characters and plot in the normal story way, maybe it’s about ART!” and so it is highly experimental and we shall see if it makes for a satisfying story, or if it is merely art with story glimpses.

I’m not going to say much about the plot except that it is sci-fi, and fantasy (of course), and involves explosions.  Otherwise the mystery will be all gone…

At any rate, I’ll be better prepared for Spectra afterward.



Stories · Uncategorized

Get to Know Me Tag (Writer’s Edition)

Yo.  Writers are playing tag right now.


– Link back to the person who created the tag – Savannah
– Thank the person who tagged you –  Thank you, Kenzie!
– Share the tag graphic (optional, optional! I know it won’t go with everyone’s blog design) –
The Get To Know Me Tag Writer's Edtion [post title image]
– Tag eleven bloggers – Someday I’ll make another tag and I’ll be able to tag people without them already being tagged.


Vital Stats and Appearance

(pen)Name: Jethan

Nicknames: Jethan, I don’t have many nicknames online.

Birthday: Shhhh…

Hair color and length: Golden, brassy dark blonde.  A bit past my shoulders.

Eye color:  Blue-green.

Braces/piercings/tattoos: I once had braces, those days are over now… *Phew*

Righty or lefty: Right

Ethnicity: Anglo-Saxon Celtic Viking



First novel written: The Dragon Keep
First novel completed: Kitallia’s Return if you can call it a novel.  It’s 15 pages after I edited it.  I’ve never finished anything.  Maybe there’s a complete novel midway in Sheyla’s series, but nothing is properly finished.
Award for writing: Nothing except fun little tag awards.  Or winning NaNoWriMo.  I have three November wins.  Plus some camp stuff, but that’s easy to relax on.
First publication: You’re reading my blog.  It’s all right here.
Conference: Nope.
Query/Pitch: Nada.



Novel (that you wrote):  Spectra, could it be anything else at this point?  No, it couldn’t.

Genre: There is always Fantasy.  Then War.  Then Romance.  Then Apocalypse.

Author: I don’t actually have one…There’s ones I like, but I couldn’t pick one, single favorite.  Unless I can pick Nintendo.  I will always enjoy the Legend of Zelda stories.  Always.

Writing Music: Pandora Journey mixes, Position Music…just go on youtube and search for epic music mixes!

Time To Write: Seems to be afternoon and evening.

Writing Snack/Drink: Water, juice, hydration.  I would like snacks, but they are distracting.  Drinks are tidier.

Movie: I have no idea.

Writing Memory: I’ve really enjoyed my friends reactions to reading Spectra.

Childhood Book: Hmm…as far as proper novels go (rather than picture books or comic books)…maybe Harry Potter.



Reading: Nothing.

Writing: Spectra when I can.

Listening to: Like I said about writing music…Starless Sky

Also, there are birds outside.

Watching: People.

Learning: Life can turn out awesomely after a long, rough time.  I bet my stories will reflect that.  (That’s why they’re so long. 😛 )

(Sheyla: <:(  )



Want To Be Published:  Certainly.  At some point.  I’m closer since I’m blogging Spectra, even though it’s very, veeeeerrry sloooow….

Indie or Traditional: Myself.  Indie all the way.

Wildest Goal: Ruling a Multi-media Story Empire

The End

I’m supposed to tag 11 people?  Nope, nope.

How’s writing going?  Anyone else behind on Camp or their personal projects but feeling very chill and relaxed about that?